Castledown

Hello Castledown,

This is where you can keep in contact with me to let me know what you have been doing on your lovely laptops.

Also on here I will ask for your comments and display some of your work.

First thing!

Look at this picture of a winter tree. Can you write a short poem about the tree and send it to me.

Poem based on the Winter tree

Poem based on the Winter tree

Look forward to hearing from you soon.

Mr Lazell

104 responses to this post.

  1. The snow
    I opened up the curtans.
    And it was all white.
    I pulled on my clothes and pulled my boots on.
    To go out side.
    I walked to the park in the freezing cold.
    And built a big snowman .
    With a carrot on its nose.
    The snow was white and fluffy.
    I plaed in it all day long .
    I had lots of fun .
    Im sad now its all gone.

    Reply

  2. Me and the snow
    The snow is white
    it was vary cold to totouch.
    I played with it,but notfor much.
    I plated out sied and made a snow
    ball.I threw it at my mum and my
    cousin.love playing in the snow,
    but i was realy cold.

    Reply

  3. me and my mummy was in the snow.
    made the body I made the head.
    we pot a carrot for his nose.
    we pot grapes for the eyes
    but my feet got feezing
    cold I had a nice time.

    Reply

  4. The snow
    The snow is white and very cold.
    Throwing snowballs and makeing a snowman.
    Lots of people haveing fun at the park.
    It made me happy but i did not like being cold.

    Reply

  5. Snowball figts going on out side.
    Snowmans talking in the snow.
    snowmans stuck in the snow.

    Reply

  6. Making snowmen in the snow.
    It feel’s very Icy for me.
    I feel very happy though.
    Looking at the tree’s with the sun shimmering on them.
    They look very white and beautiful.

    Going sledging on the ice.
    Make it more slippery is the thing to do.
    Throwing snow ball’s fun but Icy.

    Reply

  7. I was in my house, Children piaying in the snow
    I was feeling so nice and warm, children making it glow,
    when I saw the window should I go out?
    filled with snow. should I stay in?

    I felt so frozen
    Inothing moved like a wall,
    I could hear my self move
    I could hear someone call.

    Reply

  8. I like the snow i think its fun
    i like playing snowballes with my Mum
    i think its fun im chewing i would never play in the sun
    i like the snow i think its fun i like playing
    snowballes with my mum.

    Reply

  9. In the snow

    I was out in the snow just mysef and me.
    I see my frend yipee yipee yipee.
    I asked to play she said yes let’s bild a snow-man.
    Let’s show my mum it look’s grat.
    I know what to do let’s play on my sleg.
    Now me and my frend have done that it is time for bed.
    the day end’s and it’s time for bed.

    Reply

  10. snow is white
    snow is cold
    but snow is fun
    so lets go…
    to the garden
    we will play
    snowballs til its time for tea
    i took of my winters cota and my botes
    and sat down and had a cup of tea.

    Reply

  11. i got s sledge and went down a hill
    i got a sledge and i knocked for my friend
    i got my friend and made a snowman.

    Reply

  12. Standing on a hill
    my hands have pins and needles
    holding on to my slay
    going down all the way

    Reply

  13. The Snow

    im playng in the snow the snow is fun fun fun
    and i want to have a snow ball fight with my family and friends.

    Reply

  14. Posted by Anonymous on February 12, 2009 at 11:54 am

    The Snow

    I woke up I looked out the window.
    The groud was as white like a biake.
    I went out side and I froed a snowball at my friend.
    My friend was rolling a big ball.
    We made a snowman.

    Reply

  15. when i woke up
    i saw some snow
    when i woke up it was winter
    my hands were wiggling
    when i woke up i saw some ice
    it was snowing
    my body was wiggling

    Reply

  16. I was playing in the snow
    sNOWBAL WE DID THROW
    Everybody got covered in
    Snow is really good fun
    Playing in the snow
    Freezing cold

    Reply

  17. I was playing in the snow.
    It was cold and icy.
    We were building a snowman in the road.
    A car came and smashed it down.
    We had to build it back up
    Uncle Simon was throwing snowballs out of the window
    He got very cold hands

    Reply

  18. I looked out the window
    on a cold frosty morning
    the pritty snowflakes
    were gently falling
    I pate my coat,scarf,
    hat and rushed outside it was cold
    The snowflakes were wet
    and eveything was white
    we slid down the hill
    we made snowmen
    at the end of the day
    we had a big snowball fight

    Reply

  19. Posted by hstlexc on February 12, 2009 at 2:34 pm

    Year 3,

    I love your poems – it sounds like you really enjoy playing in the snow!

    EK, RER, SW, CM, JS, JH – excellent use of language!

    TR – outstanding!

    Read through all the poems – leave a comment to say which is your favourite and why!

    Reply

  20. Posted by T.R on February 12, 2009 at 5:09 pm

    hellow Mr lezel

    thank you or makeing a blog for us I looked at it and I liked it
    anyway thank you for coming in and telling us how to go on this web.
    Wish you could come on thursday again and tell us more.

    Reply

  21. Posted by nk on March 1, 2009 at 8:26 am

    I love yoar poem

    Reply

  22. Posted by Ek on March 1, 2009 at 8:31 am

    Hello evrey one

    Reply

  23. Posted by Ek on March 1, 2009 at 8:34 am

    Thank you mr Lazell foryoar coment
    love from year 3

    Reply

  24. Posted by m.m on March 10, 2009 at 5:47 pm

    A lovely poem. M.M

    love Dad

    Reply

  25. Posted by m.m on March 10, 2009 at 5:54 pm

    I like s.w n.k and e.k

    from your mate megan

    Reply

  26. Posted by m.m on March 10, 2009 at 6:03 pm

    Hello MR lezel

    On are laptop’s we have been working on rainrorest’s.

    Reply

  27. Posted by m.m on March 13, 2009 at 8:36 pm

    lovely poems.. well done.. good girl m.m…. love mummy xx

    Reply

  28. Posted by sw on March 13, 2009 at 8:37 pm

    lovely poem… well done… love auntie trace xx

    Reply

  29. Posted by GL on April 28, 2009 at 9:29 am

    Ek,

    Really cool poem, loved your description

    Keep it up

    Reply

  30. Posted by TS on May 20, 2009 at 9:34 am

    Wow, jh, it’s really good!!!!!!!

    Reply

  31. Posted by TS on May 20, 2009 at 9:34 am

    I Loved the ryhming.

    Reply

  32. Posted by DK on May 20, 2009 at 9:35 am

    Hi Mr Lazell,

    Really enjoyed working with you, Thanks ALOT :-)
    I really wish I could do it every day!
    Thanks
    I would have loved it to be longer.

    Reply

  33. Posted by Jm on May 20, 2009 at 9:36 am

    Mr Lazell

    I think that the tablets are great because they are fun to use and they help me. I like 2 simple.

    Reply

  34. Posted by BL on May 20, 2009 at 9:36 am

    To/ Mr Lazell

    On the tablets I really enjoyed pivot stick and bond bubbles on the maths games.

    I didn’t dislike anything, I loved every part of the tablets.Even noodle!

    Reply

  35. Posted by mjb on May 20, 2009 at 9:36 am

    I enjoyed having a tablet to myself because at home I have to share my computer with my brother!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Reply

  36. Posted by k.h on May 20, 2009 at 9:37 am

    I like the ryhming

    Reply

  37. Posted by S.B on May 20, 2009 at 9:37 am

    Mr Lazell,
    What I enjoyed about having the tablets most was that you could do amost anything and its made my typing a lot better.

    Reply

  38. Posted by NP on May 20, 2009 at 9:38 am

    Mr lazel,

    I have liked the poems

    Keep up the good work

    Reply

    • Posted by princess precious on December 9, 2011 at 7:41 am

      hi mr lazell its me kaia from christ church i have a winter poem listen

      winter winter oh what a delight lovely snow ball fights
      the snow is crispy under my feet mum falls over we all laugh her socks over trainers are a new brand i really love it

      Reply

  39. Posted by jh on May 20, 2009 at 9:38 am

    Mr lazel,

    I have liked lots of the poems

    Keep it up

    Reply

  40. Posted by TL on May 20, 2009 at 9:38 am

    Mr Lazell

    I have enjoyed the tablets because I like the Maths games. Sometimes the tablets take too long to load.

    Reply

  41. Posted by NBP on May 20, 2009 at 9:39 am

    I have enjoyed using the tablets,they have loads of cool features.I wish I had one at home.

    I did enjoy every thing in the tablets.

    Reply

  42. Posted by PW on May 20, 2009 at 9:39 am

    Mr Lazell,

    I enjoyed Pivot Stick Figure even though I had a bit of trouble on the tablets.

    Though I didn’t enjoy the Fraction Wall in Maths Games.

    Reply

  43. Posted by Rolo on May 20, 2009 at 9:39 am

    Mr lazell

    I really enjoed 2 paint a pitcher on 2simple and i loved noodle.

    Reply

  44. Posted by DW on May 20, 2009 at 9:39 am

    Mr Lazell,

    On the tablets I have mostly enjoyed everything.My favourite part was when we got out of class to play on interesting creations on the internet.

    what I did’nt like was nothing, I didn’t dislike anything.

    I wish I had one at home.

    Reply

  45. Posted by DA on May 20, 2009 at 9:41 am

    I have enjoyed my indian work and pivot stick animation. In fact, I liked everything!

    Reply

  46. Posted by AP on May 20, 2009 at 9:41 am

    Mr.Lazell,

    I enjoyed the noodle a lot because you can create cool new music.

    And I enjoyed everything.

    Reply

  47. Posted by wogie on May 20, 2009 at 9:43 am

    mr lazell

    I enjoiyed going on 2simple and going on 2paint a picture. I didn’t have time to go on noodle , but it looks good.
    I enjoyed everything and I can’t wait untill we get the tablets again.

    Reply

  48. Posted by ODS on May 20, 2009 at 9:43 am

    Hello Mr Lazell,

    I have loved working with you. I hope we get the tablets again. I particularly liked photo story 3
    thank you for helping me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Reply

  49. Posted by ns on May 21, 2009 at 9:13 am

    dear mister lazell
    i loved yousing the tablet thank YOU……..

    Reply

  50. Posted by kml on May 21, 2009 at 9:15 am

    I have really enjoyed having the tablets. I liked the animations and the backgrounds are cool.

    I found it a little difficult painting on 2paintapicture.

    The pens are cool.

    Reply

  51. Posted by ksw on May 21, 2009 at 9:15 am

    I love the whole tablet there is nothing i do not like

    Reply

  52. Posted by kc on May 21, 2009 at 9:17 am

    i have in eyion haveing the table with you bye

    from kc

    Reply

  53. Posted by nims on May 21, 2009 at 9:18 am

    i lllloooovvvveeee pivot stick now youve told me how to download it i`m so going to! i`m gonna miss these tablets so much . iiii lllloooovvvveeee tttthhhheeeemmmm!!!!

    Reply

  54. Posted by S.L on May 21, 2009 at 9:19 am

    Dear Lazell

    I enjoyed the stinkmen and the 2paint a picture.

    Reply

  55. Posted by jb on May 21, 2009 at 9:19 am

    dear mr.Lazell

    It was great fun playing on the tablet and pivotl animations.I put a back ground that i felt like it.

    Reply

  56. Posted by kc on May 21, 2009 at 9:19 am

    I have enjoyed having the tablets with you.

    I didn’t like when the batteries kept dying. I really liked the pivot stick animator.

    from kc

    Reply

  57. Posted by CF on May 21, 2009 at 9:20 am

    Ive liked having cars as my background. I liked playing the maths games too.

    Reply

  58. Posted by rc on May 21, 2009 at 9:20 am

    it wos good working wil you

    Reply

  59. Posted by AMB on May 21, 2009 at 9:20 am

    To Mr L and Mr C,

    I really liked the pen because when you go on to 2simple you can draw a very good picture.

    I loved everything about them.

    Reply

  60. Posted by JH on May 21, 2009 at 9:21 am

    Dear mr lazell

    I have enjoed stick man and photoshop

    Reply

  61. Posted by k.c on May 21, 2009 at 9:21 am

    Dear Mr Lazell,
    I have really enjoyed having the tablets and having you and Mr cousins paying class 5s visits and I also liked making the powerpoints.
    thank you for everything
    k.c

    Reply

  62. Posted by jcf on May 21, 2009 at 9:21 am

    dear,mr lezzell i have really enjoyed having the tablets over this short period. i am so sorry to see them go. it was so much fun working on them. i have enjoyed pivot stick and so much more. i loved having my screen saver as shoes. thankyou so much excellent clusterer. me!!!!!

    Reply

  63. Posted by cw on May 21, 2009 at 9:23 am

    Dear Mr Lazell,

    I have relly enjoyed having the tablets, especially all of the programs on them all so having the touch screen with the pen.

    Reply

  64. Posted by DC on May 21, 2009 at 9:23 am

    dear mis lazell I like yaur work.

    Reply

  65. Posted by jcf on May 21, 2009 at 9:24 am

    Dear Mr Lazell. I have really enjoyed having the tablets over this short period. I am sorry to see them go. It was so much fun working on them. I have enjoyed pivot stick and so much more. I loved having my screen saver as shoes. Thank you so much Excellence Cluster!!

    Reply

  66. Posted by RF on May 21, 2009 at 9:27 am

    Hi Mr.Lazell I enjoyed having the tablets there realy cool I like how you can twist the screen round & you use the pen on it is fantastic I don’t want them to go please can they stay a little longer pretty please with a big red cherry on top.

    Reply

  67. Posted by SV on May 21, 2009 at 9:28 am

    I enjoyed my work on Savitri and Satryvan. I think the tablets are really good because you can turn the screens. I enjoyed drawing the pictures. My microphone didn’t work which was a pain when recording my voice on photostory.

    Reply

  68. Posted by k.c on May 21, 2009 at 9:34 am

    Dear Mr Lazell,
    I have really enjoyed having you paying us visit with the tablets and teaching us all of the activities to do on the tablets like 2simple, pivitstick,powerpoints and lots more.

    Thanks for everything
    k.c.

    Reply

  69. Posted by AMB on May 21, 2009 at 9:40 am

    To Mr L

    I think that there should be a tablet club for after school.

    Lots of people love the tablets so there should be a club with tablets.

    Reply

  70. Posted by T.F.J.B on May 21, 2009 at 9:43 am

    Dear Mr Lazell

    My favourate thing I did on the tablets was when we made a powerpoint show on Indian stuff.I did it on Indian cars.At the moment,I haven’t finished it yet but it is so fun to make.Know things went wrong with it since I was using it.
    Thank you from T.F.J.B.

    Reply

  71. Posted by jh on May 22, 2009 at 2:48 pm

    dear mr lzel

    thak you

    Reply

  72. Posted by TS on May 23, 2009 at 10:41 am

    Mr Lazell,

    The castledown page is working on my computer, without errors, now.

    From TS,
    (The person who let you use their memory stick for the Tablets)

    Reply

  73. Posted by nicholas on July 10, 2009 at 10:24 am

    mr.lazell i really miss you please come back to castledown from 5b in castledown

    Reply

  74. Posted by DJS on April 20, 2010 at 1:19 pm

    I beat level 10 0n 3 cups and a ball WAHOO

    Reply

  75. Posted by hstlexc on May 9, 2011 at 3:27 pm

    Brilliant !!!!!

    Reply

  76. Posted by hstlexc on May 9, 2011 at 3:29 pm

    SM,

    That is amazing. Well done!!!!

    Reply

  77. Posted by A.W on May 25, 2011 at 11:15 am

    exciting with our laptops.Having a great time.Thank you.

    Reply

  78. Posted by jack on May 25, 2011 at 11:17 am

    thanks mr kellier and mr lazell for the anamaton it was realy fun thanks with the robots as well by

    Reply

  79. Posted by jd on May 25, 2011 at 11:19 am

    Dear mr hellier,mr lazell I loved the animation IT was amazing

    Reply

  80. Posted by R.M and S.S on May 25, 2011 at 11:20 am

    Dear Mr Lazell and Mr Hellier,
    we are just writing to say we had a great time on the mini tablets it was really fun.In class mr miles told us to use the robots to make 5 moves in 1 we did it but we also done 10 moves in one! hope to see you 2 soon

    Reply

  81. Posted by KT and LD on May 25, 2011 at 11:21 am

    Dear Mr Hellier and Mr Lazell,

    We both enjoyed learning different things on the laptops.

    Reply

  82. Posted by R.M on May 25, 2011 at 12:51 pm

    Thanks for a great time on the laptops althoughi think i could do better on pivot stick

    Reply

  83. Posted by j.w on May 25, 2011 at 12:52 pm

    Dear Mr hellier and Mr lazell i have realy enjoyed the laptops and the anamation and controling the lego robots and pivic stick and doing the slide shows as well thanks.J.W

    Reply

  84. Posted by lw on May 25, 2011 at 12:53 pm

    I liked the hole term on the computers it was great now i now more on the computers and i learnt more thank you for helping me on the computers by luke

    Reply

  85. Posted by s.s on May 25, 2011 at 12:54 pm

    To mr Lazell and mr Hellier it has been great having the laptops thankyou.

    Reply

  86. Posted by KT on May 25, 2011 at 12:55 pm

    Dear Mr Lazell

    I have had fun with you with evrything thank you for coming.

    Reply

  87. Posted by C.R on May 25, 2011 at 12:55 pm

    Dear Mr Lazell

    I liked working with you. The tablits are really cool I like it beacause the sceen tured around and we could use pen with it I wish you could come back next year when were in year six.

    Reply

  88. Posted by A.W on May 25, 2011 at 12:57 pm

    Dear Mr Hellier I like the robots and I enjoyed making the movies on the laptops.

    Reply

  89. Posted by J D on May 25, 2011 at 12:58 pm

    Dear Mr Hellier I liked the legorobots and the animation it was amazing,worthy, trustworthy ,righteous,moral and honest.

    Reply

  90. Posted by lw on May 25, 2011 at 12:59 pm

    I liked the hole term on the computers now i now more on the computers it was great and i leared more thank you for helping me on the computers

    Reply

  91. Posted by I.M on May 25, 2011 at 1:00 pm

    Dear Mr Lazell
    I realy enjoyed working on the tablets and making animations on them. I also enjoyed the games you showed to us, especially the Simon game.
    Thank you
    from
    I.M

    Reply

  92. Posted by fh on May 25, 2011 at 1:00 pm

    Dear Mr Hellier and Mr Lazell thank you for coming in and teaching us and letting us use all your quitment . I loved useing the rowbowlabs. Making our own movie it was brillent . It was the best thing I have done on laptops in my life.

    THANK YOU SO MUCH !!!!!!!!!!!!THANK YOU.

    Reply

  93. Posted by bh on May 25, 2011 at 1:01 pm

    Dear Mr Lazel,Mr Hellier
    I have really enjoyed it when you came in, the best part for me was when we did the ‘stop motion animation’.Although I enjoyed everything else that was the best part for me.Thank you.

    Reply

  94. Posted by C.R on May 25, 2011 at 1:02 pm

    Dear Mr Lazell

    I enjoyed working with the laptops and working with you and mr Hellier.I love drawing on my dsi but it was not as good as the laptop.Well it’s 6x bigger anyways.The games were awsome on this laptop.

    Reply

  95. Posted by c.w on May 25, 2011 at 1:03 pm

    Dear Mr Hellier and Mr Lazell,

    I really enjoyed everthing. I elyjoyed making the aninaion with my fiends!

    Reply

  96. Posted by LD on May 25, 2011 at 1:03 pm

    Dear Mr Hellier and Mr Lazell,

    I really enjoyed alot of things, here are some of them. I enjoyed the time we played with the robots! I also liked it when we went out side and measured the light and temperature so we could record the results. But the best part was making the animated movie with my friends!!!!!!

    Reply

  97. Posted by C.H on May 25, 2011 at 1:04 pm

    Dear Mr Hellieer
    it was good doing roblab technology and with the senser

    Reply

  98. Posted by bc on May 25, 2011 at 1:04 pm

    Dear Mr Hellier and Mr Lazell I liked the tablets thay are real cool and I liked the pens aswell. The screens turn around so you can show people what I have done.And I liked making an animation.

    Reply

  99. Posted by GM on May 25, 2011 at 1:04 pm

    Dear Mr Lazell and Mr Hellier, I really enjoyed working on the tablets especially making a movie. The robots were cool too. Thankyou for making it possible.

    Reply

  100. Posted by J.C on May 25, 2011 at 1:06 pm

    Dear MR HELLIER, MR LAZELL

    I Like the things you do with us like Animation, robolabs and simon says.

    Reply

  101. Posted by C.H on May 25, 2011 at 1:10 pm

    Dear Mr Lazell
    Thank you for Teaching us

    THANK YOU !

    Reply

  102. Posted by princess precious on October 1, 2011 at 6:42 am

    hello mr lazell i go christ church but this is the school i used to go in thanks for teaching me in christ church miss k been trying to make another appointment with you to come by please have a lovely weekend.bye

    Reply

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